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After diverting further into the story to give you a real Valentine smaple last week, I am hopping back to Henri's reappraisal of his enforced holiday at his brother and sister-in-law's riding school for disabled children.
The simplicity of Christmas at the farm had appealed to Henri. The joy of seeing it through the eyes of his three-month-old nephew, Jonathan, intrigued him, and brought a new magic and meaning to the day. Yes, they’d exchanged presents and stuffed themselves motionless with the awesome food Melanie prepared. It was, he knew, a Christmas that would ever remain as one of his most precious memories.
He’d expected to chafe at the lack of a filled schedule. Had wondered what he’d do with himself during this enforced period of inactivity, and laughed at the absurdity.
True, for the first few days, the disruption of his life, coupled with the re-entry of Monica into his orbit, stoked both his fury and sense of disconnection. Used to a life of routine with every moment accounted for, it took several days to acclimatise to the rhythm of the farm.
The sight of his brother’s joy filled him with an unknown sense of yearning he couldn’t identify. Heck, his life was all mapped out for him. One day he’d step into his father’s shoes, marry the woman his parents chose for him, sire the required heir and a spare, and—
His steps faltered, and he reflected back over the last few weeks, since his arrival.
27 comments:
I love this story! Somehow living the life he should has lost it's appeal. Can't wait to read more. Great excerpt, Sherry, and as usual, beautifully written.
I love the flow of you words. The excerpt pulled me into the story. I want to more.
It's fun reading about what happens when someone's life is disrupted. The fact that Henri stops and contemplates the change tells us a lot about him and his life. Good writing.
Beautifully written, Sherry! I like Henri's frustration with the different pace of farm life, and I love how you showed us that Christmas is gaining more of its magic because of his new nephew. Great sample!
This is beautifully introspective, Sherry! I love how the "simple" things are touching him. ;c)
Oh, Henri is changing his mind about things! I love this.
Thanks for your kind words, Jean. You are always so supportive, I appreciate it.
Thanks Tmonique Stephens, I appreciate your feedback.
Sandy, to a large degree you can take credit for this scene, as I wrote it in after one of your comments when I posted the office scene with henri's father. I'm glad this works for you, and thank you too, for givingme a better insight to his reactions to being made to leave his busy life.
Thanks Gwendolyn, comment from this wonderful group helped me write this scene.
Bless, Sarah, given his previous lifestyle I felt only the 'simple' would 'reach' him.
:-) Thanks for your kind words, Elaine.
I love this story and how everything flows smoothly
OMG! Love the cover, love the opening line. The simplicity of Christmas...AWESOME! A MUST READ FOR SURE!!
I love this - a fish out of water story, with a twist! I'd love to see how he adjusts. Nice sample.
Being around someone else's happiness can make you re-evaluate your own. Looks like Henri may be having second thoughts about that planned life--good! Beautiful sample, Sherry.
I love this sample, and the effect of the forced change of scenery on Henri. There's just something about farm/country living that has that kind of effect on people who are used to a different kind of lifestyle.
Thanks for your kind words, Lindsay
Hasn't Tishia done an amazing job with this cover, Kim, and against so many odds, too.
Thanks for your kind words.
rofl Patricia, what else can I say? :-) Keep on reading!!
Thanks Jenna, I'm so delighted this scene is meeting with such approval. Thanks for coming by.
Carrie-Anne, you have it in a nutshell about the countryside. Thanks for coming by.
Wonderful sample! Love the emotion.
Relax and enjoy it, Henri. Sounds ideal, to me. :)
Thanks Jennifer, glad you enjoyed this.
:-) Dianne, thanks for popping in.
This is such a wonderful story.
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