Today's Tuesday's Tales prompt is Finger. So I have gone back to a former work in progress about one of my royal twins, Sacha.
While she cradled her son, Melanie
watched the twins from her seat on the edge of the group. She noted while Sacha
laughed and joked with his twin, the camaraderie didn’t reflect in his eyes.
And Simeon?
Of the two he was naturally more suave
than Sacha, drew the women to him without even trying but beneath the free and
easy façade he presented to the world was a hard working earnest young
man. Sometimes too earnest, Melanie
thought.
Sometimes too earnest?
Was that because as the younger twin he
constantly felt obligated to prove himself?
But this man was hard, honed, and alert.
But was it because he was a killer, or did he have some other, different
agenda. No one here could deny the man could take out two of the four heirs to
the throne—her heart stuttered—and their children. Would that make him a
suicide bomber, or had he already secreted some device to go off after he left?
When the door opened and Liam joined
them she studied his reaction to their latest visitor closely. And there it was; the slightest withdrawal,
the anxious glance in her direction, but no agitation.
Thrown by his lack of surprise she
waited until his gaze rested on hers, narrowed and then with the slightest of
nods he crossed the room to sit on the arm of her chair.
He took his son from her and cradled the
sleeping child against his shoulder. “Did you know about this?”
Liam’s question wiped the smile from her
eyes.
“I did not,” she snapped, and almost too
late remembered to lower her voice. “Is there something you should have told
me?”
“That’s just it, my dear. I may have got
there in the end, but Sacha knew almost before the man got out of his car that he—“
He pointed to their visitor “— is not Simeon, and your father seems to have
suddenly dropped off the planet.
Schooled to maintain her countenance
under stress, Melanie knew she’d failed this time. Fear for her father, and worry about their
intruder coalesced and cut right through her normal ability to maintain
self-control.
Laying a restraining arm on her husband’s
shoulder Melanie rose, crossed to the wet bar and held up the whisky decanter.
“Anyone for a snifter?” When Liam nodded
she glance at the picture of the grouse on the lable and splashed some of the
finest blended whiskey into a glass and handed it to him.
“Simeon? What will you have?”
“Nothing for me, thanks, I’ve just told
Sacha I’m on the midnight flight to the States.”
The
midnight flight? There
was no midnight flight from Glasgow and he’d have to leave now if he wanted to
reach Edinburgh. And why state a specific flight time when their family jet
would be waiting for him.
“Oh? I tend to forget that although the main
Jubilee events are over, you all still have foreign celebratory tours to make.”
Apparently without thinking she handed Simeon a glass of whiskey and watched
him toss it back in one gulp. Whoever
schooled their visitor had overlooked a few of the little, but still important
details. Like Simeon never drank
whiskey.
Sacha’s rueful glance in her direction
affirmed his appreciation of her tactics. “I think I’ll have a drink too.” He
rose, stood next to her with his back to the room. “It’s a pleasure to watch
you at work. No wonder Liam failed to penetrate your cover. Although I at the
time I thought it was because he was besotted with you.”
With a laugh she looked up at him and for
the first time that evening, Melanie watched Sacha’s mischievous smile reach
his eyes. “Besotted, Sacha?”
“Besotted, Melanie, and you know it.”
“Actually, no I didn’t.” her suddenly
serious response had them both glancing at the man posing as Sacha’s twin.
“I have phone calls to make. Don’t let
him leave before I return.”
Without a backward glance at her husband
still snuggling their child, she left the room.
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18 comments:
That was a very nicely written scene!
:-) Thanks for your kind words.
You definitely have a knack for intrigue!
:-) Always value your comments Christina. Thanks.
Very mysterious scene you have here.
Beautifully written, building suspense slowly. I am intrigued and looking forward to more.
I enjoyed this scene. The tension building was very nicely done.
Nice !!
Thanks Lindsay :-)
:-) Thanks Jean
Thanks Carolyn. :-)
:-) Iris.
Love the suspense and the mystery you built in this scene.
I love this scene. Very suspenseful.
:-) Thanks Karen
Glad you enjoyed it J.P. Grider :-)
Intriguing scene, I liked the way you captured the mystery among the characters.
:-) thanks Davee
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