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Today's word prompt is Flower and I've shifted to another WIP. My heroine takes off on Christmas day in an attempt to outrun the festivities. She has no destination in mind and ends up calling at a fully book B&B for directions to the nearest petrol station.
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The gravelled surface of the driveway
glowed golden and silver. A welcoming contrast to more of the high dark, stark hedging
she’d driven past for the last ten miles. The drive curved round to her right
before the hedge ended and revealed a large colonnaded house. It reminded her
more of an ancestral home than a commonal-garden B&B. Pity it was fully
booked.
The charm of the place called to her.
She pulled the car to a stop in front
of the stone steps and cut the engine and looked about her. A large sweep of
lawn ended in another high hedge. No doubt edging the road she’d just left.
The sunshine reflected off the grey
stonework, and glistening windows twinkled like diamonds. Whoever ran the place
loved it. Even from where she still sat behind the steering wheel and peered up
at the building an aura of warmth and love reached out to her.
To the right of the house trees,
enough of them to describe them as a small wood ran way beyond the back of the
building. Was it all part of the property, or did it run out into what she
assumed would be more of the fields she’d glimpsed in the gaps and opening in
the hedges? She picked up her bag and slid out from behind the wheel and looked
behind her. The drive narrowed again from the semi-circle in front of the
house, and rhododendrons already showing the promise of a full head of flowers next spring bowed to the lane that separated
them. Too dark for her liking.
If she had a place like this she’d cut
such large bushes back and create a sense of space. Not that the place needed
it. It looked massive, and the grounds promised to be much the same. Did it
have the proverbial fishing lake at the back of the property, or perhaps
somewhere beyond the trees. Did the farmland she’d been passing belong to this
place? How the other half lived. She’d have liked to spend at least one night
here. Pity about the full booking. But she still needed to know how far until
she found a petrol station that would be open today, so she slipped the strap
of her bag onto her shoulder, pushed the wisp of hair the breeze had blown into
her face back behind her ear and headed for the massive wood panelled door.
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7 comments:
Wonderful description. Nice post.
:-) Thanks Iris.
Love your description here. Do I detect your love of gardening coming through in your writing? I wouldn't be surprised.
:-) Jean, I like gardening! I also like wide spaces! Thanks for your kind words.
What a lovely post! So full of detail.
great description - I felt like I was there. Am looking forward to what's behind the door.
I want to stay there too. Your description created the longing.
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