It's good to be back again. This week's HDH offering is from a WIP, working title, Megan's Story. Thanks for coming by, I always enjoy feedback.
“Did she now?”
Unaware of her maid’s desperate grab to prevent the tiffany lamp from
crashing to the floor, Esmy paced the cluttered room her lace shawl fanning out
behind her. “Her latest scheme must be
even more outrageous than usual then, and now it’s coming unstuck.” After the last outrageous scheme to extort
money from a prominent banker in the City that resulted in the threat of prosecution,
Esmy had hoped her daughter would learn her lesson. Apparently it hadn’t achieved the desired
affect. It seemed the money it cost her
to hush up the affair had been a waste of effort. Turning, Esmy focused on the woman still
waiting for instructions. “I’m not
interested in my daughter’s threats, if she calls again tell her …”
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14 comments:
Great hook, well done!
From the sound of this, you've been busy cooking up another devious plot for your characters!
Nice hook:)
What? Tell her what? You have me hooked!
interesting characters
:-) Thanks Lucy.
LOL Christina, I hope so. :-)
Thanks Nicole :-)
:-) Alisha, glad you liked this.
Thanks sassyspeaks :-)
Sounds like troublesome daughter. Makes me wonder if she'll finally stop helping her out. Great hook!
Eek! Tell her what? Great hook!
:-) Thanks meryvamp.
Thanks Jessica :-)
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