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This week our prompt word is PRETTY and my snippet continues from last week. Having escaped their pursuers, Kate's now wondering how stupid she's been to help a stranger evade his attackers, and what possible retribution will fall on her head for her well-meaning but possible stupid actions.
His
deep voice resonated deep within her. Geeze how could she notice something like
that in such a situation? Gathering her scattered wits Kate leaned in and
helped the man to a kneeling position.
“No,
it wasn’t me, and no, I don’t know who attacked you and bundled you into my
car,” she said at the same time wondering how her voice came out so steadily
when her insides were melting. “Who are you and why were you trussed up like a
chicken and bundled into my car?”
Under
the circumstances she shouldn’t notice his powerful build. Her hands should
itch to release his bonds so they could skim over his torso, and further, not
want to stroke all over that glistening skin.
Before
he could respond she held up the scissors. “I’m sorry I only have these. I
never thought to buy a knife to cut the cords.” She smacked her hand to her
forehead and rushed to get a bottle of water out of the shopping bag on the
back seat.
“Here,
drink this.” She uncapped the bottle, held it to his lips and gradually tipped
it up until he drained the contents dry. He held his hands out and watched her
attempt to cut, and then saw through the nylon. The moment his hands were free
the man tried to climb out of his prison.
“Wait.”
Holding her hand up like a traffic cop Kate went back for the jersey she’d
bought. “I had to guess your size,” she explained, “but put this on before you
do anything else.” Not sure whether relief or disappointment roared through her
system when the sweater fell below his hips, Kate moved closer to allow him to
use her shoulder as a prop while he struggled to manoeuvre into a position to
swing his legs over the sill of the car to allow her to release those bonds
too.
“Who
are you,” she asked again. “And why…”
“I
don’t know why for sure, and although I have an idea of who, I’m not certain
enough to name names.”
Dropping
to her knees, Kate began cutting through the nylon cord. And wondered whether
she was out of her mind to release a stranger who refused share his name or
explain who had dumped him in her car and why. Anger nudged her concern to one
side. Had she been mad to drive away knowing he was in her boot? And to do so
knowing a bunch of strangers were now after her as well as the man waiting for
her to free his legs? Upon reflection it seemed pretty stupid.
“I
won’t hurt you.”
His
voice snapped her out of her contemplation and she realised she’d sat back on
her heals, her hands, still holding the scissors, resting in her lap.
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14 comments:
The action is progressing so well! Good job with getting him cut loose and covered. Now she's on the run too, along with him. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Thanks Flossie :-)
Oh wow, I can feel her chaotic emotions myself. Well done.
Great job! I can almost taste her emotions.
:-) Thanks Sarah
Thanks Vicki :-)
You're pulling me in more and more on this story. Well done!
:-) Thanks Jillian
Ooohhh. I love this! What a great way to meet! Very original. And she's attracted to him, too. Yes. I'm looking forward to more of this story. Gotta find out what's going on.
You write the action in this story as well as the romance. Great job!
Trisha Faye
Thanks Jean, I always appreciate your opinion. :-)
Awe, Trisha, what a nice thing to say, thank you.
The mystery deepens. Now, I'm going to have to bite my nails for both of them.Yes, I know they're fictional, but you make the menace real and close.
Oh my, thank you. You've made my day :-)
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