21 August 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Thanks again, to everyone who came by last Sunday. I appreciate your comments and company :-)  Today's snippet carries on from last week.

The storm.
Their flight from the house.
The river.
And when they‟d been pulled from the raging torrents, she‟d adamantly refused to let the medics take her to hospital. The images he'd rather forget flashed through his mind. The comfort they sought in each other's arms and the realization life might have ceased for both of them that night.

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13 comments:

Sondra said...

I'm hooked. Your six makes me want to read more.

Jenna said...

Really intense six. It does make you want to read more! Sounds like a storm is brewing within them as well. Good job.

Jean said...

Love the underlying threat and excitement. Great six!

Jessica K said...

Short and intense sentences are so effective for SSS!

Zee Monodee said...

Intense and snappy - makes me wonder what happens next. :)

Angela S. Stone said...

Ohhh very interesting six! I wanna know what happens next for sure!

xx
A.

Cate Masters said...

Raises so many questions, I want to read on. Great six.

Lindsay said...

Intense six

Taryn Kincaid said...

Powerful stuff.

Vivien Dean said...

There's a breathless quality to this that heightens the mood. Good work!

Lisa Fox said...

Very strong writing!

Cheryl M. said...

Nice! (However, the formatting threw me off a bit as there are quotations marks in odd spots) and I do want to read more xD

Jennifer Lowery (Kamptner) said...

Intense six as always! Thanks for sharing!