The storm.
Their flight from the house.
The river.
And when they‟d been pulled from the raging torrents, she‟d adamantly refused to let the medics take her to hospital. The images he'd rather forget flashed through his mind. The comfort they sought in each other's arms and the realization life might have ceased for both of them that night.
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13 comments:
I'm hooked. Your six makes me want to read more.
Really intense six. It does make you want to read more! Sounds like a storm is brewing within them as well. Good job.
Love the underlying threat and excitement. Great six!
Short and intense sentences are so effective for SSS!
Intense and snappy - makes me wonder what happens next. :)
Ohhh very interesting six! I wanna know what happens next for sure!
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Raises so many questions, I want to read on. Great six.
Intense six
Powerful stuff.
There's a breathless quality to this that heightens the mood. Good work!
Very strong writing!
Nice! (However, the formatting threw me off a bit as there are quotations marks in odd spots) and I do want to read more xD
Intense six as always! Thanks for sharing!
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