20 May 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Thanks to all who drop by, I always appreciates your comments. My six sentences today come from my latest WIP

It didn’t take rocket science to estimate the victim was several inches taller than her five feet five inches, or that a linebacker would envy the width of his shoulders. She dropped to her knees and placed a finger on his neck, searching for a pulse. Relief at the steady but faint pulse allowed her gaze to take in the quality of his clothes.



Top end, she mused. Not a man who’d shop at Wall Mart. No, she thought, this man would have doors opened for him when all the plebs had gone home for the night.

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19 comments:

Susan Roebuck said...

That tells us reams about him in just six sentences. Well done!

Sherry Gloag said...

:-) Thaks Susan. Hope your w.end is a good one.

Sandra Sookoo said...

loved the "not at Walmart" comment :-)

gemma parkes said...

You can tell so much from a mans clothes! Enjoyed this six!

Paula Martin said...

Great six, I like how she sums him up from looking at his clothes.

Cate Masters said...

Wonderful description, and I loved her character voice. Well done!

Gem Sivad said...

She's smart and in charge, takes his vitals, and then assesses his clothing. Lots going on in this six.

Elin Gregory said...

This tells us a lot about both of them - his appearance and probably stauts and her intelligence and competence. Very well, and economically, done.

Jenna said...

This sets the scene nicely and gives tons of info about both characters. Very well done! I definitely want to read more.

Karen Michelle Nutt said...

I gotta know what happened to him now. Great six.

sue said...

Yes I want to know more too - wonder who he is?

diannehartsock said...

These six raise a lot of questions! I'm as curious as she is about him. :)

Sandy Nachlinger said...

Nice intro to your hero (?) The reader gets a look at him and gets to see your heroine's first impression too. Good writing.

Zee Monodee said...

You tell us so much about him here! Really well done! :)

Sherry Gloag said...

Thanks Gemma, Sandra, and Paula.

Sherry Gloag said...

Thanks Gem, Elin and Cate.

Sherry Gloag said...

Thans jenna, Karen and Sue.

Sherry Gloag said...

Thanks Diane, Sandy and Zee.

nutschell said...

wow! I'm so intrigued I want to read the rest of the story:)
Nutschell
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