Thanks to all who drop by, I always appreciates your comments. My six sentences today come from my latest WIP
It didn’t take rocket science to estimate the victim was several inches taller than her five feet five inches, or that a linebacker would envy the width of his shoulders. She dropped to her knees and placed a finger on his neck, searching for a pulse. Relief at the steady but faint pulse allowed her gaze to take in the quality of his clothes.
Top end, she mused. Not a man who’d shop at Wall Mart. No, she thought, this man would have doors opened for him when all the plebs had gone home for the night.
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19 comments:
That tells us reams about him in just six sentences. Well done!
:-) Thaks Susan. Hope your w.end is a good one.
loved the "not at Walmart" comment :-)
You can tell so much from a mans clothes! Enjoyed this six!
Great six, I like how she sums him up from looking at his clothes.
Wonderful description, and I loved her character voice. Well done!
She's smart and in charge, takes his vitals, and then assesses his clothing. Lots going on in this six.
This tells us a lot about both of them - his appearance and probably stauts and her intelligence and competence. Very well, and economically, done.
This sets the scene nicely and gives tons of info about both characters. Very well done! I definitely want to read more.
I gotta know what happened to him now. Great six.
Yes I want to know more too - wonder who he is?
These six raise a lot of questions! I'm as curious as she is about him. :)
Nice intro to your hero (?) The reader gets a look at him and gets to see your heroine's first impression too. Good writing.
You tell us so much about him here! Really well done! :)
Thanks Gemma, Sandra, and Paula.
Thanks Gem, Elin and Cate.
Thans jenna, Karen and Sue.
Thanks Diane, Sandy and Zee.
wow! I'm so intrigued I want to read the rest of the story:)
Nutschell
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