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Thank you for stopping by. This week's word prompt is court, my snippet is from Consuela's story, my sequel to Vidal's Honor. This scene takes place in England in 1813 when my hero, Juan, learns his brother has Consuela in his sights.
While he’d rushed back to Spain, his
brother, Diago, had made his way to London, and according to his friend Lord Vidal,
was even now attempting to court Consuela.
The only available room left in the
inn was tiny, with a window locked down tight against the night air, so the
room smelled of stale ale and other unmentionable odours. He smote one fist in
the other and strode from the edge of the bed where he’d sat to the window and
peered out.
“You been and gone and missed it by
five minutes.” The innkeeper told him when he’d rushed in to enquire when the
next coach left for London. “Won’t be
another ‘afore tomorrow afternoon.”
His enquiries into hiring a coach
hadn’t fared any better. It seemed there
was a prize cock fight in the village just five miles down the road and every
available vehicle for hire was already spoken for. Assuming there’d be no spare
horses for hire either he’d not even asked, but now as he watched the shadows
shift across the ground below his window he wondered whether the plan forming
in his mind would land him in prison if he was caught.
‘Another
day won’t make a difference.’ A silent voice in his head urged, but
instinct told Juan the voice lied. If he
didn’t know better he could almost swear he heard Consuela calling out to him
for help.
20 comments:
Original and fun.
Don't wait.. run after the coach.. Just get there.. Great Sherry.xx
Don`t stand there thinking about it, get moving!
I hope he doesn't get arrested. Sometimes our instincts are much smarter than we are.
Thanks, Mageela :-)
Lol, Roz. I like your thinking!
rofl Vicki, he gets help.
He does get help, Sarah, thanks for coming by.
Hope he can get to her before anything happens to prevent it
Run. Steal a horse. Whatever it takes to get to her before Diago hurts her! Great job!
If he thinks he can hear her, he'd better get going! Nice post.
Thanks Tricia, while this WIP is not progressing smoothly, I do know help is at hand.
Thanks for coming by Lindsay.
He's no intention of hanging about, Iris :-) Thanks for coming by.
The story keeps on getting interesting.
:-) Thanks S.E.
I love the tension you built in this scene. I could feel it and see him pacing, a worried expression on his face. Yes, I'm with him. I hear Consuela calling him, too. Love this story!
So glad you enjoyed this Jean. For the time being, I think, next week's will be the last offering from Consuela's Story.
oooh, methinks his gut instincts are right. He better hurry!
:-) Thanks for coming by Jillian.
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