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This week's 'tale' is from the third chapter of my current, untitled, WIP. And is written to the prompt 'Bargain'
“If he thinks Adrian can sweeten the bargain by
offering me up like a lump of meat on a butcher’s slab, he’s even more out of
his arrogant mind than usual.” Samantha stormed round the converted pool house,
her arms flapping like the sails of an old-fashioned windmill.
“I’m no more charmed with this proposal than you
are,” Rafe snapped back. It offended him to witness Samantha’s aggravation at
her father’s demand even though his own fury equalled hers. He disliked being
manipulated every bit as much as she did.
“He’s not even my father! How dare he call me here
and make such a stupendously outrageous demand. Did you know that after his
work, his main ambition is to play hopscotch with my life?” She spun round when
she reached the far wall before stalking back to where he stood. “And how come
neither, if what you say is true—” She stopped long enough to all but drill a
hole through his chest with her finger. “If what he claims is true,” she amended
rapidly when she caught his scowl. “—that neither of us had any inkling about
this relationship?”
She spun away again, her hands cupping her elbows
and stared out of the glass-panelled wall to watch the sunlight dance across
the surface of the wind-swept pool.
“Cousins! How can we be cousins? You’re Italian, and I’m as boringly British
as they come. Where’s the connection?”
With her arms still firmly wrapped round her waist she shot him a glance over
her shoulder. “Anyway, what does your fiancée have to say about this? I bet she hasn’t remained silent at the prospect
of bagging such a lucrative husband. I mean, think of the alimony when you both
get fed-up with each other. Mind you,” she added, her hands imitating a
windmill again, “she hasn’t got an idiot father standing over her demanding she
marry you against her will, has she?”
18 comments:
Very emotional post! Well done.
Thanks Vicki
intriguing- I need more
wow. I love it. Such a great scene- well done- I can see it unfold!!
I'm intrigued by this.
The emotion in this is flying off the page. Good job.
Nothing like overbearing parents meddling in their kids love lives. Intriguing post
Thanks Kathleen
:-) Jillian
Thanks Lindsey
:-) Thanks Karen
Too True, Davee, Thanks.
Wow - I need to know more about these two! I am so curious to know why they are being arranged. Can't wait to read more!!
:-) Thanks Tricia, glad it worked for you.
This was a great scene.
Wow. Very intense and very emotional. great!
:-)Thanks S.E.
Glad it worked for you, Iris. :-)
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