Showing posts with label Magpie Chronicles. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Magpie Chronicles. Show all posts

26 January 2014

Sunday Snippet


 
Happy first birthday to SnippetSunday :-)
 
The week's Sunday Snippet  is a continuation from last week's SS snippet, in my current WIP
Daily Mail

Her phone rang. Would this call reveal the first clue?
“Yes.”
“We’ve traced the father to a hotel in New York,” Sommers, her senior detective on her team, informed her.
“He’s still in the States?” Was that disappointment or relief surging through her, Rebecca wondered. While she’d hate for any family member to be involved, his absence from the scene focussed the attention back on Lucy Farraday.
 
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19 January 2014

Sunday Snippet

 
The week's Sunday Snippet  is from another short story in my current WIP
 
Daily Mail
Almost every available officer and hundreds of civilian volunteers were searching for the boy. Who could she dispatch to visit the mother again?
So far the police had managed to withhold the information from the media that they’d found Jackson’s jacket beneath a scrub of brambles at the bottom of the hill. Had he been at the bottom of the hill, or had someone thrown his jacket there to deflect attention?
Questions, questions… When would someone come up with some concrete answers?
 
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