26 January 2014

Sunday Snippet


 
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The week's Sunday Snippet  is a continuation from last week's SS snippet, in my current WIP
Daily Mail

Her phone rang. Would this call reveal the first clue?
“Yes.”
“We’ve traced the father to a hotel in New York,” Sommers, her senior detective on her team, informed her.
“He’s still in the States?” Was that disappointment or relief surging through her, Rebecca wondered. While she’d hate for any family member to be involved, his absence from the scene focussed the attention back on Lucy Farraday.
 
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20 comments:

Linda said...

Hum, could he have time to go and come back?

SherryGLoag said...

I wondered that too, as I wrote this scene. Thanks for coming by Linda.

PT said...

I went back to look at last week's snippet for a refresher. I wonder if the missing boy is with the father...

Karen Michelle Nutt said...

Intriguing. I want to know more.

Frank C. Etier said...

Would this call reveal the first clue?
“Yes.”

Did she answer the narrator's question?
Nice 8!

Sarah W said...

Very interesting---I always enjoy seeing how detectives put the pieces together!

homecomingbook said...

Boy and father both missing?

Veronica Scott said...

Intriguing...great snippet, much more to be revealed no doubt!

Elaine Cantrell said...

This begs to be explored a little more! Nice 8.

SherryGLoag said...

nice thought PT, thanks for coming by.

SherryGLoag said...

:-) Thanks Karen. I hope to post more next week.

SherryGLoag said...

:-) Thanks for coming by Frank.

SherryGLoag said...

:-) Thanks Sarah.

SherryGLoag said...

No the father's not missing homecomingbook he's stranded in the States. I appreciate your company, thanks.

SherryGLoag said...

Thanks for coming by Veronica.

SherryGLoag said...

:-) Thanks Elaine.

Linda Morris said...

Hmmm, intriguing!

SherryGLoag said...

:-) Thanks Linda.

allyson said...

I want to know more!

SherryGLoag said...

:-) I'm so glad Allyson, thanks for coming by.