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This week I'm sharing one more snippet of my short paranormal story, Riddick.
“What kind of behaviour is that, I’d like to know?” Hands on hips and flashing green eyes told me what he thought of my instinctive reaction to his presence.
“I’m very sorry,” I kept my voice penitent, and reached my hand down for him to step onto. “I didn’t know you were there.
“Didn’t know I was there?” His indignation ripped over me, like waves in a storm. “Of course you knew I was there. You were looking right at me.”
“I was looking at a moth.” I corrected. He didn’t have sole rights to indignation, and mine was growing exponentially with every twist and turn in the unfolding situation.
“Like I say.” His satisfaction flowed over me liked warm honey.” You were looking right at me.”
26 comments:
ooh, intriguing sample! Love the last line. Thanks for sharing.
How very unexpected and intriguing.
Loved your sample. Poor moth.
Great sample!
I don't think I'll ever look at tiny creatures in the same way again!
Awesome! I love that last line, great job!
Fun dialogue between the two
Love the way this is developing! What a unique premise. :) Great sample!
Love the indignation.
Elaine Cantrell
LOL great conversation here! Nice sample.
Warm honey, my goodness! What a great scene.
:-) Jennifer, glad you like it. Thanks for coming by.
Thanks for your kind words, beth :-0
Thanks Patricia. I appreciate your comapny.
Thanks Joselyn :-)
:-) Kay
Thanks for your kind words, Lisa Beth.
:-) Thanks for coming by Lindsay.
:-) Thanks Jenna.
LOL Elaine, me too.
Thanks Miriam.
:-) Jessica, thanks for coming by.
I really enjoyed your post. I can't wait to get to know your characters better, especially the little guy!
He's very arrogant for being so small! Wonder if he can grow to man size? If so, then what! She might want to be more careful...
Thanks for stopping by my site. :)
:-) Sandy, thanks for coming by. I do have some major work to do on this yet.
Dianne, (I'm sorry, I think I've mispelled your name a couple of times.)
Thanks for your comments and company.
I don't know what's going on, but I'm having some major problems trying to leave comments on some sites again this week.
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