As always, my thanks to all of you who stop by and read my efforts. I always appreciate your company.
This week, I'm taking a break from offering snippets from my current novel, Duty Calls, available in paperback, ebook formats, kindle and nook.
Instead here are the opening lines of my first short story, Precious Treasures, published in 2009 by LASR
(editied for SSS)
“Excuse me I’m looking for Sarah DeLacey.”
She didn’t need the touch of his fingers resting lightly on her shoulder, nor the sound of the gravelly voice to recognize the man standing behind her crouched frame. With a smile and word of assurance for the toddler grappling with his building blocks, she rose and turned.
Would he recognize her after all these years? Ten years had passed beneath the bridge called ‘Life’. Her hair no longer flowed down her back in a smooth black curtain, now it stood on end in carefully styled spikes of multi-hued blonde, her once make-up-free face was carefully masked beneath skillfully applied cosmetics.
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14 comments:
What a great opening! I know I want to read more.
beautiful description - visual - and who might he be? thank you
Intriguing! Is she in hiding, or did she just want a complete do-over? Definitely makes me want to read on.
Great description and great emotion. A lot of implied emotional history that draws me in.
So much going on in just six sentences! Is she going to tell him who she is or not? Intreiguing six!
Tension, tension, tension!! What's he done to her, that she wishes he doesn't recognize her now?
Awesome six, wonderfully written.
:-) Thank you Lisa, glad you liked it.
Thanks for coming by Sue. I appreciate your comapny
No, she' not hidig, Cate. Thanks for coming by.
Thanks for your kind words, J.A. Beard
Jenna, until I discovered SSS I didn't appreciate the power six sentences could have.
LOL, Zee. He didn't get his priorities right.
Thans, Alix, I appreciate your kind words.
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