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This week I'm taking a break for The Brat and sharing more of a short paranormal story that so far has failed to find a home.
A cool breeze replaced the relentless heat of the day and I imagined the garden sighing with relief. I sipped my dry white wine and let the taste linger on my tongue before enjoying its slide down my throat. Only the solar garden lamps lit the deck-area. I’d left the indoor lights off, allowing the breeze to filter through the house before going indoors and locking up for the night.
This was the time I usually ‘talked’ through the events of my day with Gerald.
“That is just so weird.” Rachel exclaimed when she turned up unexpectedly, one evening. “He’s been gone for nearly two years now and you ‘talk’ to him every night!” She’d shifted to the other end of the rocker. “I suppose you’re going to tell me he ‘talks’ right back at you!” She didn’t quite snort with derision, but it was close!
“Sort of.” I admitted cautiously. After all how did you explain the ‘sort of knowing’ that settled after you vocally aired your thoughts and problems aloud to an empty garden?
“Like I say,” she’d moved back and given me a hug to take the sting from her words. “You’re seriously weird.” She paused for effect, “but I still love you.”
20 comments:
Very intriguing sample. Thanks for sharing.
Beautifully written sample! Would love to read more :)
Nice sample. I'd love to know more about this character.
A very sweet, sad excerpt. I imagine I'd talk to my husband in the same way, if he was gone.
Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my site.
Love the sample.
Thanks Lia :-)
Thanks for your kind words Jenifer. :-)
Thanks for you interest, Patricia :-)
Thanks for coming by Dianne, and I enjoy your offerings too.
:-) Thanks Lindsay.
Very poignant. Thank you!
Is he actually there, communicating back somehow? Love this, Sherry.
Gunnar
You've really set a mood in this scene. I especially like the garden sighing. Nice.
Grabbed me, Sherry. I love the garden imagery too.
Marsha, thanks for coming by.
Good question, Gunnar, thanksfor coming by.
:-) Thanks Sandy.
Oh, Beth, I really appreciate your comment. Thanks.
Those we love are never gone entirely. I don't think she's so weird. Good luck placing this!
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