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“Again? What does he mean by ‘again?’” The fire died from her eyes and she stepped away from him. “What’s changed that Brandon broke his silence?”
Julian handed over the crumpled note.
“If you want to see your daughter again, hand over the papers by Thursday.”
“Thursday.” Deborah tapped one slim finger against the paper.
“Friday.” Her fist scrunched the note into a ball. “Brandon is to produce those papers before Thursday and I am to agree to wed him the following day. Where is the connection?” She spoke almost to herself and Julian leaned forward to hear her.
Ignoring him, she began pacing from one end of the room to the other. Julian caught Henrietta’s anxious look and shook his head. Freddie maintained his sister had a logical mind, and it interested him to see her ditch her indignation and address the latest calamity with a cool approach.
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14 comments:
Interesting dilemma. I wonder how it resolves. Nice sample
I wonder what the connection is. Very interesting.
I wonder about the connection too, as well as the reason for his sister's calm demeanor. Is she really that calm?
Interesting scene going on here
Very interesting set-up of the situation. I wonder what she's thinking beneath that calm exterior.
There must be so much more than meets the eye. Intriguing excerpt, Sherry!
You have intrigued me with this excerpt, Sherry. Now I need to know!
Love the logical mind taking over, too.
Tmonique Stephens :-) thanks for coming by. Glad it caught your interest.
Thanks for visitng Joselyn, yeah it is a complex scene, wasn't sure if it would work as a short sample.
Thanks for coming by Sandy, and your kind words.
:-) Thanks Lindsay.
Carrie-Anne, thanks for coming by. :-)
Sarah, thanks for coming by, yes there are threads all over the place, and here they are trying to unravel them :-)
LOL Jean, I appreciate your visit.
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