Six Sentence Sunday
After having my head stuck in finishing this Regency romance, I'm back and offering you six more sentences while it is now away househunting.
Thank you to everyone who's visited in the past, I hope I'll see you again.
When his new wife had left him the night before, he’d returned downstairs to find Freddie waiting for him in the library with a glass of brandy in his hand. “She is willing to accept the tale we concocted?”
“Yes, she is.” They’d talked of many things well into the night and separated with the shared satisfaction that they’d achieved a job well done.
Now he watched the woman beside him meld with her horse as the wind caught her hair and tugged it out of the knot she’d created at her neck. “This is what being alive is all about,” she cried, her eyes brighter than he’d ever seen them and he could not doubt her as the ground beneath them slipped away.
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36 comments:
Intriguing, am wondering what tale they've concocted now!
Ugh! You're doing A to Z AND SSS??
Now I feel lazy giving up SSS for April.
:)
Very intriguing. I want to know what they've concocted! Love the last paragraph. Very vivid.
Threre's a concocted tale? Gotta know what that is about.
I loved how you described the woman riding the horse. What a picture! :)
Very intriguing - I wonder what he and Freddie are cooking up.
And what are we concocting? Naughty midnight rendezvous? Plans for world domination? A new recipe for the ultimate hot fudge brownie vanilla ice cream mouthgasm?
Very vivid, well done!
yes the picture of her on the horse is very vivid - and curious to know what's going on
This doesn't sound good for her. What are they up to? Intriguing six!
:-) Paula, I'm delighted it's got you interested. Thanks for coming by.
Let's put it this way Cindy, I've done SSS this week, anyway. Have been so immersed in finishing this WIP - have kinda ingored SSx2 and my usual participation in Tuesday tales too, recently.
Thank you for your kind words joanne, they mean a lot. :-)
Karen, thanks for your kind words, I'm delighted the description of deborah on her horse came across so strongly. It seemed very vivid when writing it.
Hi Zee, thanks for your company.
LOL Jennifer, I'll keep your suggestions in mind for another time :-)
:-) Thank you Vvien
I'm delighted it piqued your curiiostiy, Sue. Thanks for coming by.
:-) Dianne, she is also in on the plans, she just hasn't been told all of them!
Love to know what they've cooked up. The last paragraph is super.
Intriguing six! Extremely well done.
I love how you describe the way he watches her here. Great imagery :)
Crikey, plots within plots. :) Nice six.
And just what have they concocted? Must know more! Great six!
I *love* the "meld with her horse" line. I'm a longtime rider and this reall brings me into this moment. Just lovely.
I could feel the wind in her hair! Nice six, Sherry!
So many questions! What did they concoct and why? Will she believe them? Can't wait for more! Glad to see you back at SSS.
Thanks for coming by Elaine, and for your kind words.
Thanks Ursula, I appreciate your comment and visit.
Thanks Melynda. :-)
Thanks Elin :-)
:-) Glad you enjoyed it Jennifer. Thanks for coming by.
Sarah, I really appreciate your comment, as I know little about horses except I thik they are awesome looking animals.
I once had the privilege of watching the results after a horse had received the telling Touch therapy.
:-) Glad the scene worked so well for you. Thanks for our comment, Nichelle.
Thanks Jenna, missed SSS but was trying to get this finished. :-) Glad it works for you.
As someone who never could "meld" with a horse, I'm happy someone can. *lol* Lovely descriptions and very vivid. I felt the wind tugging at my hair.
I'm so pleased you enjoyed this scene Ginger. Thanks for your kind words.
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