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I am carrying on where I left off last time
With
a twist of his body he pushed her foil clear and brought his own down on her
leather-gloved hand.
Only
her gasp broke the shocked silence before she leapt back and lunged again.
She
had a point, he’d used a moved barred by almost all fencing clubs, but this, he
reminded himself, wasn’t a fight of his choosing, nor was it being played
within club rules. The woman fought with
a skill and intensity that moved this fight beyond personal to malicious.
He
wished he knew why.
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24 comments:
Woa, they are still at it. She's tenacious. And yes, I'm also wondering why she's so persistent and relentless. Nice hook.
I'm wondering what pissed her off.
~Tamara Monteau
LOL Meryvamp, when read as a single scenen it doesn't feel so long and laboured. Thanks for coming by.
Just for you :-) I'll offer something different next week!
havensrealm :-) Thanks for coming by. I *may or may not* reveal the reason behing this fight sometime in the futre, haven't decided on that yet.
Ohh great job!!!
She's quite feisty indeed. Nice hook.
And the fight continues on...well done. I love watching these two parry and lunge...hope to see them do it away from the foils!
:-) Thanks Lacie.
:-) Thanks for coming by, Sebrina.
:-) Thanks Sarah, I think there will be a plenty of skirmishing between these two.
Great hook, well done!
I'm wondering why too. Thanks for sharing. :)
C.R.
Nice fight scene :-)
:-) Thanks Lucy
:-) Thanks C. Moss
Thanks Sandra :-)
Love these two. She has something on him that he doesn't remember. Great selection.
Wow! Great inner thoughts! Hope you continue this next week!
:-) Flossie, I have to admit, this scene surprised me when it turned up! Thanks for coming by.
:-) Thanks Kathleen. I may give it one more shot,then start on something else. Thanks for coming by.
Sounds intense. What a great idea for a bloghop.
:-) Thanks for coming by, Nick.
I do wonder why it has taken this turn. I want to know more! Thanks for sharing...and for visiting my blog.
She must have a grudge against him.
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