Working to this week's Tuesday's Tales prompt of 'green' I am continuing with a short snippet from the piece I started two weeks ago of my current WIP. ( I still haven't discovered the heroine's name yet - hence the 'she'.)
When she woke Tyler had taken her parents’ place at her bedside. Patches of bruised blue beneath his eyes advertised his lack of
sleep, while his dark green shirt told her
he’d been home and changed since he’d rescued her. And, she noticed, that
although he looked straight at her, it hadn’t registered yet that she was awake
and studying his face.
“Hi.” Shyness robbed her of the words she wanted
say. The sharpening of Tyler’s eyes, the worry that clouded them, she saw it
all.
The warmth of his hand clasping hers travelled up
her arm and into her heart and then she remembered and tried to pull her hand
away.
His smile, so soft, so gentle and so full of understanding
joined the warmth surrounding her heart. A heart that had gone into overdrive.
“She’s gone,” Tyler said.
“Gone?” She tried to refocus her attention on his
words rather than what he was doing to her emotions. "Who? What?"
“Rachel,” he said.
“She’s gone, as are four other girls involved in the attack on you.
“Oh!” Relief roared through her. She could admit, even to herself now, the thought of
returning to school had terrified her nearly as much as the prospect of losing
Tyler. But, she looked away and back again, perhaps she hadn’t lost him
after all.
“No,” he said, and she watched him trace a pattern
on the back of her hand with his thumb. “I love you. You don’t get rid of me that easily.”
Her world righted itself and she relished the warmth of his fingers curled round hers and smiled at her
parents as they entered the room before turning to gaze into Tyler’s eyes.
“I’m glad,” she said “because, without you, my
world just wouldn’t be right.” Leaning
up, she touched his lips with a gentle finger; turned to her parents she
reached out with her other hand.
“I’m so sorry I said all those horrible things, I
didn’t mean them.”
“We know.” Her mother came to the side of the bed
and rested her hand over the one now clasped in Tyler’s, while her father beamed
at them all from where he stood propped up against the door.
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16 comments:
That is soo sweet :)
What a tender moment. Emotional and perfect
I love this piece. Your sensitive descriptions of small details and actions paint an understated emotional scene. I can feel it all without being hit over the head. Beautifully done. I hope to read more of these two.
:-) Thanks Fiona, I appreciate your kind words.
An Open Book, I'm delighted you enjoyed this. Thanks for coming by. :-)
:-) Jean, I wrote quite a bit for last week but fogot to post it up :-(, I'm glad this bit works for you.
This was so sweet and perfect. The fact that Tyler rescued her and is now taking care of her along with the apology to her parents - very well done!
I really felt the emotion in this scene. I could picture myself in the room. :)
Thanks tricia, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Davee, thank you for your kind words.
Tyler is a true gentleman. I like the description of how his touch made her heart go into overdrive. So much emotion.
Glad it was a misunderstanding .... I loved the dialogue between them.
:-) Thanks Tai, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Iris :-) Thanks for coming by.
Such a romantic scene
:-) Thanks Lindsay
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