30 March 2013

Sweet Saturday Sample 30-03-13

 
 
 
Time for Sweet Saturday Sample again, and this week I'm continuing from where I left off last time one of my Gasquet Princes WsIP, its working title - Sacha's Story.
 
Instinct could be twisted, but the stranger’s first mistake validated his instinctive belief in the switch.  Now they had to find out the true identity of the new arrival and who was pulling these new and alarming strings.
He’d suspect Charles deBonet if the man hadn’t died when Liam and Paxman rescued Melanie…
Then who?
And where was Simeon?
“Wait.”  Sacha wanted to shrug off Liam’s restraining hand on his shoulder. Wanted to face the imposter who dared to impersonate his twin, but he forced himself to face Liam.
“What?”
“Precisely man, what are you going to do?” Liam dropped his hand and tunnelled his fingers through his hair. “If this man realises we are on to him, he’ll inform his controllers as soon as he leaves here.” Liam paused, stroked his chin and nodded. “If he is still alive Simeon’s life may depend on what we do during the next few hours."
 
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6 comments:

Jenna said...

Really nice tension and conflict in this scene. Can't wait to see how Liam and Sacha handle this situation. Nice sample.

SherryGLoag said...

:-) Thanks Jenna

jeff7salter said...

too short ... I was just getting into it.

Elaine Cantrell said...

I'm like Jeff. Way too short. I liked it.

Creations by Laurel-Rain Snow said...

Very suspenseful...and now I'm intrigued. Thanks for sharing...and for visiting my blog.

Sherry Gloag said...

:-) Thanks for coming by Laurel-Rain