Time for Sweet
Saturday Sample again, and this week I'm continuing
from where I left off last time one of my Gasquet
Princes WsIP, its working title - Sacha's Story.
Instinct could be twisted, but the stranger’s first
mistake validated his instinctive belief in the switch. Now they had to find out the true identity of
the new arrival and who was pulling these new and alarming strings.
He’d suspect Charles deBonet if the man hadn’t
died when Liam and Paxman rescued Melanie…
Then who?
And where was Simeon?
“Wait.” Sacha
wanted to shrug off Liam’s restraining hand on his shoulder. Wanted to face the
imposter who dared to impersonate his twin, but he forced himself to face Liam.
“What?”
“Precisely man, what are you going to do?” Liam
dropped his hand and tunnelled his fingers through his hair. “If this man realises we are on to him, he’ll inform his controllers as soon as he leaves here.” Liam paused, stroked his chin and nodded. “If he is still alive Simeon’s life may depend on what we do during the next few hours."
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6 comments:
Really nice tension and conflict in this scene. Can't wait to see how Liam and Sacha handle this situation. Nice sample.
:-) Thanks Jenna
too short ... I was just getting into it.
I'm like Jeff. Way too short. I liked it.
Very suspenseful...and now I'm intrigued. Thanks for sharing...and for visiting my blog.
:-) Thanks for coming by Laurel-Rain
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