He’d waited two years before inviting Alex to join them for Thanksgiving. Last year she declined, using work as an excuse. This year… This year she was somewhere out there in the teaming rain and the dark.
Alone!
He had to go to her.
20 November 2011
Six Sentence Sunday
He’d waited two years before inviting Alex to join them for Thanksgiving. Last year she declined, using work as an excuse. This year… This year she was somewhere out there in the teaming rain and the dark.
Alone!
He had to go to her.
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Yes, he should definitely go with her!
Love the urgency of the last two lines :) Great six
definitely! great 6
Aw, sweet!
Yes, Go! I feel his need.
so get out there and find her already
*Grins* Go get her and don't let her go this time. :)
i wonder why she needed an excuse to decline the invitation... There's more here than meets the eye, isn't there? Good hooks, Sherry--not just the urgency of the end, but also the deeper meanings. Loved it!
great hook in your six....love the hero that's on a rescue mission! Great six :)
He should go, but what will happen when he finds her? Nice intrigue going on here!
Go go go!
Stupid woman--what's she doing in the rain when she could be with a hero? :-)
Builds nicely and then takes a turn into suspense. Liked it! Terrific excerpt!
Thanks for coming by and your comment. Lisa. I'm sorry for being so late in responding.
:-) Thanks Zee. Glad it works for you.
Thanks, Liz.
:-) Thanks Gayle.
Bless, Ginger. Thanks for coming by. Sorry I'm so late responding.
he's on his way jayel :-) Thanks for coming by.
Absolutely Mirriam. Thanks for coming by.
Thanks for coming by Guilie. You can read the earlier clips for this story in my Sweet Samples and Sunday Sixes every weekend this month if you want to discover what happened before.
:-) Christine. I appreciate your visit.
LOL Dianne. Have a little 'faith'. Thanks for coming by.
:-) Alix, thanks for your visit.
Thanks for coming by Karysa Faire
Thanks veronicascott, I appreciate your comment.
... and go quickly! :)
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