20 November 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Thank you to everyone who visits and also comments, I appreciate you all.  This week is a continuation of yesterday's posting of my short story Thanks Given.

He’d waited two years before inviting Alex to join them for Thanksgiving. Last year she declined, using work as an excuse. This year… This year she was somewhere out there in the teaming rain and the dark.

Alone!

He had to go to her.

27 comments:

Lisa Fox said...

Yes, he should definitely go with her!

Zee Monodee said...

Love the urgency of the last two lines :) Great six

Liz said...

definitely! great 6

Gayle Ramage said...

Aw, sweet!

Ginger Simpson said...

Yes, Go! I feel his need.

Jayel Kaye said...

so get out there and find her already

mirriamsmyth said...

*Grins* Go get her and don't let her go this time. :)

Guilie said...

i wonder why she needed an excuse to decline the invitation... There's more here than meets the eye, isn't there? Good hooks, Sherry--not just the urgency of the end, but also the deeper meanings. Loved it!

Christine Warner said...

great hook in your six....love the hero that's on a rescue mission! Great six :)

diannehartsock said...

He should go, but what will happen when he finds her? Nice intrigue going on here!

Alix said...

Go go go!

Karysa Faire said...

Stupid woman--what's she doing in the rain when she could be with a hero? :-)

veronicascott said...

Builds nicely and then takes a turn into suspense. Liked it! Terrific excerpt!

Sherry Gloag said...

Thanks for coming by and your comment. Lisa. I'm sorry for being so late in responding.

Sherry Gloag said...

:-) Thanks Zee. Glad it works for you.

Sherry Gloag said...

Thanks, Liz.

Sherry Gloag said...

:-) Thanks Gayle.

Sherry Gloag said...

Bless, Ginger. Thanks for coming by. Sorry I'm so late responding.

Sherry Gloag said...

he's on his way jayel :-) Thanks for coming by.

Sherry Gloag said...

Absolutely Mirriam. Thanks for coming by.

Sherry Gloag said...

Thanks for coming by Guilie. You can read the earlier clips for this story in my Sweet Samples and Sunday Sixes every weekend this month if you want to discover what happened before.

Sherry Gloag said...

:-) Christine. I appreciate your visit.

Sherry Gloag said...

LOL Dianne. Have a little 'faith'. Thanks for coming by.

Sherry Gloag said...

:-) Alix, thanks for your visit.

Sherry Gloag said...

Thanks for coming by Karysa Faire

Sherry Gloag said...

Thanks veronicascott, I appreciate your comment.

Pippa Jay said...

... and go quickly! :)